Inkdrops · on · my · Fingers

I know, I know, I haven't posted in forever. But I was looking over some stuff I wrote, and I found a poem I'm decently happy with. It's been through the editing process so many times, but I'm mostly happy with the result now. :)
( Arise, O Lady of the Night )

8335 words. Crap. I have 7719. As of yesterday, though. Haven't written today. I was ahead, well, now I simply must do something about this...

So far, though, I've been pleased with how my story's been coming along. I foresee plot issues in the near future, though. I know the direction it needs to go, but I just have to work on getting the right interaction between Theia and the philosopher-kings.

But so far, I am happy. :) I seem to have moved past the Babylon 5 crazy stage (where all I wanted to do was write Babylon 5 type stuff "It was the dawn of the third age of mankind..." etc.), which is good!

Happy Guy Fawkes Day!

This is going to be friends only, to protect my writing. Critique is welcome, encouraged, and most especially appreciated.

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inkdrops on my fingers
puddles on the floor
paper strewn about the room
and scribbles on the door

segment from "Inkdrops on my Fingers", (c) 2005, 2008 A. Valenzuela